All Comments on 'Do you like Piña Coladas? Ch. 02'

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SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfirealmost 3 years ago

Very nice follow-up, addressing the concerns about how they’d deal with the situation that followed and the recognition of their willingness to step out of their vows. I liked that we learned Sarah’s side of the breakdown, too, and the little ending brought a good closure to the story. A little short, but that’s from an author who rarely uses one word where two can also work. Great job, 5*

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

5 stars - good finish to a great idea.

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Update 2024/02 Sorry I have been away for a while. Just submitted a very short 750 word story. Not a loving wife tale either but I hope you enjoy it any. Budding author, dipping my toes in the waves of the Internet's horny citizens. I tend to write short stories in between re...

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