All Comments on 'Do You Remember When...'

Good story, I sure hope there is a part 2

Always good to experience a happy ending!

There is a bit to like, such as her revealing she liked him from the start and how much he acted like a gentleman with her. When she accepted him, they meshed well. She even patiently taught him what she liked and revealed her naughty side.

A few things bother me, like her randomly saying her measurements during sex. The big one is him animalistically humping her while she fights him. The biggest one is the rushed conclusion and really, lack of an ending. Once she gives herself over to him primally, it is kind of downhill: more time should have been invested in either them resolving the pregnancy or resolving it when he sees her walking down the street.

It is a sweet story that had a shot at 5, but with rushing it, it is a 4.

A good story. well done. Now, leave it be.

Great love story. But why did she think she had to leave him when she got pregnant? She acted like a silly woman.