All Comments on 'Doctor Games'

by ConsextualJane

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ContinentalPsyOpContinentalPsyOpalmost 3 years ago

This story is very special. Lovely eye for details ("He smashed his thumb into the key fob several times, something he always did when he was on edge."), lovely surprises, twists and turns. Especial love for "tastes like inadequacy" and Valerie the assistant calling her "sugar." Delicious story.

LordDeanLordDeanalmost 3 years ago

Just another example of how divinely you write. Your words paint erotic pictures that cause the reader's blood to surge. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is soo hot, men deserve young, tight fertile pussies. It's human nature for men to want to cum inside 18 year olds, old post wall hags can't compete.

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New story will be published the week of: 5/23/22 I like to write stories that turn people on, what else is there to say? I've been writing erotica for a couple of years now. I write mostly short, flash fiction type stories, but I'm starting to experiment with longer form stor...