All Comments on 'Doctoress'

Thank you for the commendable effort you put into writing this story. However, it'd be great if you asked somebody to proof-read/edit your writing. The idea behind the story was truly phenomenal yet the story was lacking in flow suffering from disjointed stilted writing.

Nevertheless, a commendable effort! Bravo!

Oh, to have a better translation ...[sigh]

I loved the line "I guessed under her head the cinema that it could be made".

I agree totally with the first of these comments: very good story, so well told, in French, but so poorly translated in English, by, I presume, a "Spanish cow"! !

comme on dit en français : "Parler anglais comme une vache espagnole ! "

Sincerely, and with love, for You and your stories,

Jean-Françoiis