All Comments on 'Doctor's Orders'

by Joeehartley

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Stupid story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Beautiful story of love found by 2 lonely people. The descriptive sex did not overburden the story. Overall a very enjoyable read. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good story, short but interesting character building. Good to read a writer who knows how to develop the characters. THANKS

CarolinaDoughboyCarolinaDoughboyalmost 2 years ago

Good story. Very believable. Have just started following you and look forward to reading some of your other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I don’t read romance stories and I stopped reading this one to give it 5 stars!

We’ll done… so far.

GinafrommaineGinafrommainealmost 2 years ago

I liked the story. A slow erotic build up. However there was no description of either person. Being as out if shape as they were at the beginning you would think they were both quite overweight. But that’s not the case as he said he had to put on weight.

I always thought it would be fun doing nude body drawing, either as the artist or as the model. Also love reading erotic stories (obviously). Anyway, nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good,very believable. Nice job

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 2 years ago

I can relate to your characters on so many levels except I'm carrying too much weight. So glad I read this story as I found it very enjoyable and maybe a reminder to get myself out there.

Please ignore anon and their "stupid" comment, it is far from that

PrfsrPrfsralmost 2 years ago

Nice story. You need someone to read to check for mistakes and spelling.

cors41214guycors41214guyalmost 2 years ago

Nice and gentle, but good for us older folks.

vodiodo69vodiodo69over 1 year ago

Excellent character development! Liked the story. I think they would have had a lot sooner than they did. As soon as he got naked for his modeling gig, and she is positioning him. Very disciplined for a hobby. I was very horny reading this story. Need another chapter! Chrissy

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

*****The walking and eating right is a great way to get healthy, but sex is what will keep you up!!!! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ili

Every nice

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