All Comments on 'Doing as Daddy Says Pt. 01'

I love your story so much! It's exactly the kind of thing I'd like to do with MY future Daddy! Please write more!

Great story. Love the dynamic of the relationship. Please continue. Looking forward to reading more. 😊

Perfect mix of hot and heavy, with some Safe, Sane, and Consensual BDSM, followed up by tender after care. All around an excellent story with some well placed metaphors. Definitely will keep this in my favorites!

I wouldn't have minded a few more sensory details, but I think the lack of detail actually makes the story hotter. Gives the reader a chance to fill in the details.

Great job! Looking forward to reading more of your work!