by Boxlicker101
Well written wonderfull story! Every thing about it was perfect, loved the ending with the little Girl finally able to give Kevin her trust, and Love.
Jim
As the story was winding down to the end, I expected that Shauna would give Kevin a kiss on the cheek. But your ending was so much better! This is really one of the most interesting and best written of the whole series of Donna and Kevin stories. Really well done.
Very nicely done Box. A very nice read. Just proves you don't need a lot of sex to have an interesting story. That doesn't mean that we don't want to read your more slutty ones. haha
With respect
DG
I love these characters and am happy you wrote another story about them.
As Shauna is now an important part of the story, you need to extend the story.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was quite pleasant to write, partly because I am such a softy. This is the sixth story so far in this series, and I will probably add at least one more.
I really enjoyed this story. I know more than one couple that have adopted children of other races. You have written sequels to some stories here. Really would like to see this made into a series.
To look after a child properly, without payment and just love is a wonderful thing. There are many foster parents, most are there to help the child. but there are others who are in it for the money. A nice Story about a good family
not sure I've ever seen its like anywhere here.
At the end, I'm left hoping she'll be OK, she has so much baggage she has to carry through life.