All Comments on 'Donor Uncle in Apartment Pt. 04'

Very nice story

Seems like the current story is nearly all told. Prequels telling how Pawan got to be a donor with the help of his wife's family/friends, or sister/mom's friends would rejuvenate.

You are a good story teller but you need an editor both to clear the occasional confusion between first and third person but grammar and usage

I like your story, you are excellent story teller, I am eagerly waiting for your next episode. Plz make it big like novel

You are writing the same sequence of events for all the ladies you fuck. That they easily fall into your trap the first instant without any effort. So please make the events more interesting.

The storyline of the series is exciting and very gripping. Though the reader can guess the plot, but the story still remains a titillating thriller. Look forward to more exciting episodes.

a great author. a tsunami of emotions, both spiritual and animal. It is also wonderful that the author takes the time to write such long stories.

Without a doubt one of the best you can find on Literotica.

Thank you dear author.

want more action of Rimi

The description of the ladies in deatils and the low saree,very low at times and skimpy blouses and deep cleavages and lots of ornaments...too good description...keep writing...rated 5 stars...make your heroines wear the lowest saree possible....

Before Mousami, Aparajita and Payal are pregnant but Mousami delivered very early how it is possible?!