All Comments on 'Don't Hesitate'

Excellent story, very well written. I enjoyed the humor as well as the steamy writing of their sex together

Dumb Cluck!

Really enjoyed it. You're ready for multi-chapter stories. ;)

I enjoyed the story a lot. Nice balance between well, written story and the sexual.

Hey. I appreciate all of your posts. All feedback is welcome, even ones about Dumb Clucks. I wish I had read through this piece one more time before submitting it; there are some definite issues with consistency and I realize my repetitive phrasing was a bit too, well...repetitive. I vow to write more improved stories in the future.

Hi! Dont hesitate to write more about Kyle and Matty. Repetitive or not I love it.

Funny ending lol

i don't get it. was the bit about kyle not being able to satisfy his girlfriend true?

if he has a girlfriend- why is he actively seeking out to suck his friends dick and beg his friend to stick his dick in him and cum inside him.

does matty realize he's the 'other woman', kyle is cheating on his girlfriend with him.

--kyle is only 119 lbs- i can't imagine such a tiny man appealing- unless kyle is into men who look like 14 year olds.

before this 'experience'_ matty had only had totally heterosexual experiences- for him to dive in and suck and fuck for his first experience is surprising

it wasn't bad or anything- i just don't get it