All Comments on 'Don't Overthink It! Pt. 01'

I loved the story and look forward to reading more. And hope to soon.

For a first submission that was fantastic! Reasonably good character development and good flow. I am really looking forward to seeing a part two. 5🌟 Well done!

Great story. Kind of subtle way of incest waiting to happen. Would be nice if there will be also a glimpsed of parted pussy lips as the sister casually moves around the couch or having a playful wrestling with her brother.

This story is told a little better than average and I gave a 4. Many of the descriptions used seem accurate. It will also very likely be entertaining for persons who like women who are missing their pubic hair, or have shaved pussies. However, in addition to shaved pussies (some look nice if correctly done - same day - not four days back), I like many persons also like the (sexy-public display) look of a thick (trimmed or not) bush that is perfectly highlighted by tan skin that sometimes caused the bush shine or almost glow brightly in sunlight. Some even kind of sparkle, if they have recently been wet form the ocean or from other kinds of excitement like you might expect to find / SEE on a nude beach.

This needs more chapters

Sure hope this is just an opener. Seems to be a lot of ground work and no incest. "they're just body parts"

I loved it and hope there is another chapter or two to follow!!!

Thought this was a great "starter." Seems this story has lots of possibilities if you care to pursue them. I enjoyed this as an intro and would love to see you continue their budding relationship!!

I’d like to see where this goes

Please don't leave us hanging. Chapters 2, 3, and 4 perhaps? I love the tease element you inserted into this story. I really want to see where this journey takes the two of them. Very well written. LOVED IT!!!!!!! 5 stars of course.

Need more. A lot more. Awesome pacing and you can feel the building tension. Gonna be explosive.

Loved it. Being raised nudists, my brother and I were extremely close. Siblings ought to be comfortable nude around each other. And if they want to take their relationship up a notch, go for it, enjoy it.

Very, very, well done! I look forward to further installments.

Perhaps you could write one from the sister's perspective too.

Welcome to the new author, writer, or whatever. It sure must be a strain for a genderless alien from out in space, with no relationship interests or even vices to post on Lit - all those conclusions due to scanning the Bio.....

Otherwise very good, should there be a follow-up, it may become interesting and worthwhile. Score high to the right.

Very hot story! A very natural scenario, nicely paced.

Excellent composition and almost no typos. Good grammar and very realistic, interesting and entertaining! I wish more Literotica writers were as good as you!

Very hot! Love the build up.

I really liked this story. Believable erotic in a simple basic way. Fired up my imagination toward what they would do in both the near and distant future. Too many stories focus on the man. To me, the greater interest is the woman. What drives her, what does she want, what turns her off,

You are a very good writer, thanks!

This "Sibling Story" seems very realstic. Most other stories are going much too fast in sexual relationship. These siblings are sensual but not lewd. Incest lures allways rond the corner. The lasting problem is, how can they fullfill their sexual desires?