All Comments on 'Don't Start What You Can't Finish Ch. 03'

wow 4 years to get the third chapter. Hope chapter four is soon. Really liked the story and you have a way of holding my interest.

When I saw this was the third chapter, I went back and read the other two chapters first. This is a wonderful story and I hope you decide to finish it soon.

This is, in the opinion of this reviewer, the author's finest story, and continues in this third chapter. Mark's relationships, and the complexities of them, are skillfully interwoven by the author into a truly compelling story, with all the elements one could hope for. There is also plenty of romance in the chapter, and the quality of the writing is excellent. However, it is unfortunate that this terrific series has been left unfinished, somewhat ironically, given the title of the series Don't Start What You Can't Finish. Even so, this chapter fully deserves a Five stars rating.