All Comments on 'Don't Tell Your Dad Ch. 02'

Great story, had to read part 1 to catch up.

Fantastic story, well written and full of content.

Very exciting. Specially when Marie was talking to her daughter who was outside the bathroom door while she’s inside at the same time one of her legs was up on her stepson’s shoulder and his cock buried deep inside her. Their dialogue with double meaning was so wickedly exciting.

Keep it up!

Great 2nd chapter! I cannot wait for more!

We're loving it x

Love your writing. Hope you put out more stories frequently

Such an incredible story. You're a great writer. I can't wait for chapter 3

Great writing - well paced, zero errors (and I'm picky!) and great content. Please write more stories.

My anticipation for part three is almost overwhelming. You wrote a great chapter one. I like the way you played up the tension in the preamble to the arrival of the sex scenes. Someone in their comment said that English was not your first language, but clearly you are a very competent communicator to be able to go from your favored speech and write capably in English. Five stars for chapter one by the way. Hope that part three comes real soon.

great story line - more please

Love this! Keep it going

Dirty sexy! Cheers 🥂

Please don't spoil it with adding the father to the Story..

Let it go on without him joining in or finding out

I liked the story, got me hard