All Comments on 'Don't Tell Your Dad Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

Will there be a part 3 at this point? It's been more than a year.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I liked the story, got me hard

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Please don't spoil it with adding the father to the Story..

Let it go on without him joining in or finding out

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegler7 months ago

Dirty sexy! Cheers 🥂

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Love this! Keep it going

MrBondsMrBonds12 months ago

great story line - more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

My anticipation for part three is almost overwhelming. You wrote a great chapter one. I like the way you played up the tension in the preamble to the arrival of the sex scenes. Someone in their comment said that English was not your first language, but clearly you are a very competent communicator to be able to go from your favored speech and write capably in English. Five stars for chapter one by the way. Hope that part three comes real soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great writing - well paced, zero errors (and I'm picky!) and great content. Please write more stories.

Ocean33Ocean33about 1 year ago

Such an incredible story. You're a great writer. I can't wait for chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love your writing. Hope you put out more stories frequently

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 1 year ago

Great 2nd chapter! I cannot wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Keep it up!

rodavrodavabout 1 year ago

Very exciting. Specially when Marie was talking to her daughter who was outside the bathroom door while she’s inside at the same time one of her legs was up on her stepson’s shoulder and his cock buried deep inside her. Their dialogue with double meaning was so wickedly exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fantastic story, well written and full of content.

LucieLou007LucieLou007about 1 year ago

Great story, had to read part 1 to catch up.

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