All Comments on 'Don't touch, do tell'

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PadmaBearPadmaBearover 4 years agoAuthor
Feedback Welcome

Hi all, just a note that we'd love your feedback, especially about what aspects of the story worked and suggestions for directions future stories might go...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice premise

Nice descriptions about how she gave another man a handjob. Great teasing.

But there should have been at least a little of a handjob for him. Perhaps she could have done to him what she was describing up to the point of the cock orgasming.

Four stars.

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One night, as my wife and I were playing around a bit in bed, I asked her to tell me a little bed time story. Our first novella sprung fully-formed from her fertile and mischievous imagination. Things progressed from there of course, but what I most remember was her touching m...