by NylonDreams
It's a nice start to rebuilding everything lost.
I do feel however that John needs to have a chat with Joanna and her parents and maybe even Cheryl about not even trusting him.. It was mentioned there were many meetings about this whole thing between Cheryl and Joanna and Joanna and her parents and the four of them.. but not once did they even think to include John in it.
I would be hurt the most by that.. a simple trust would have turned this situation into an even better one.
To much, yes there are some rich assholes but even they won’t go this far inside a civilized country
To much because it’s to easy to get a word or two out and even though many have been bought off it only takes a couple to start the downfall
To much to have 5,000 plus 1500 local mercenaries on call ( can you imagine the wages? And then to have them all loyal.
And way way to much sadistic torture at the end.