All Comments on 'Donuts and Boobs'

Pretty boring I have to say. The 'Loving Wives' category is meant to cover married women who are doing sex with some man/men other than their spouse. This story, of course, wanders into a bit of a fetish activity with her own spouse so the result is not something noteworthy at all. Your word level execution is nearly perfect so good on that. But your current tally of 8 followers in 6 stories tell the tale...a GOOD score would be more like 10 per published work. Do 'keep 'em coming, but try venturing into something a bit forbidden.

Great combo - donuts and boobs!

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Six stories, 8 followers. That says it all. No need wasting my time.

Very exciting story!!! Yummy 😋

Merely reading about someone else's fantasy, if it's not yours is pretty boring. Agree with Odiouser - wrong category and even this might work if you spiced it up.

Beats milk and cookies.

A scene.... maybe. People like stories. Also, using tags also show a certain level respect to your reader, especially if you're a relatively new reader and the title isn't too revealing. 2/5.