All Comments on 'Doomsday Trickery Ch. 02'

both this and the first chapter were brilliant and so hot!

wow. i am so happy to see a writing that is original. please continue submitting stories on this site.

Thank you for writing it, and if you are interested, please write more!

I thought the first story was ended excellently. When I saw this story during a Story Spin, I was excited. However, I confess I had some trepidation because it can sometimes be challenging for authors to keep the story and the writing at higher levels.

This story was a spot-on bulls-eye for maintaining the characters, the relationships, and the D/s dynamics of the first story. Of course, the writing was excellent as well.

Please keep writing. Your talent and imagination are wonderful for both reading and inspiration. Thanks.

Aweh. That was amazing, a true devotion to her true love. && a true erotic connection between the two. Amazing!

Thank You for posting the ending statement. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses. And 5🌟's

I'm not really into BDSM but nevertheless this was very hot. And at the same time a story of a very loving couple.