All Comments on 'Door to Door Demons'

perfect dialog

Really great idea, and I loved the pacing! Very well done!

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Please can we read about Rouge and Violettes other conquests

I love your works, jaury. I suggest the idea of the victim ingesting corruptive fluids (milk, grool), which permanently marks their bodies/souls and enslaves them further. Good job!

Nicely written. I would have liked the final submission to have been drawn out more, but still an enjoyable little story.

Jehovah's Witnesses don't all wear the same suit. Maybe you're thinking of young male Mormon missionaries who wear suits and travel in pairs?

Very arousing!