All Comments on 'DORA - My First Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
She gave him two orgasms THEN he ejaculated????

Pretty sure males don't work that way. Badly written. Poorly done throughout. UGH!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
writing is very rough, dialogue very difficult to follow

just a 1 *

chytownchytownalmost 9 years ago
Get An Editor**

Thanks for the read.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
you need an editor

familiar with the English language

Scorpio58Scorpio58almost 9 years agoAuthor
She gave him two orgasms...

Dear Anonymous,

First, I need to mention how brave you are, avoiding to leave even a nickname!... LOL!

Now, first, as you've probably realized, English is NOT my native language!

Second, I do write these stories, expecting them to be read by adult people who HAVE had sex already!!!

Yes, the woman "gives" the man HER orgasms as, if you want, a sign of gratitude and respect, and appreciation for his "work"!!!

AND this is valid for all the cultures, countries, tribes!!!

Many women, if they don't reach the orgasm, they FAKE it, only to keep the man satisfied and proud of himself!!!

So, what you need to understand is that SHE has had the two orgasms, and afterwards, HE ejaculated!!!

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