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wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionalmost 2 years ago

A pure service story which isn't normally seen here. Interleaving the story with scenes from the first episode of Yellowstone is interesting and seamless. The raw tension in the story presents a service relationship well. Nicely done!

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I write a story only when it begs to be written. Most of my stories float about in my mind for long periods before they ever get told. They have to fight their way into existence, much like myself. You know if it made it to the surface, it must be good.