All Comments on 'Dormant Desires Pt. 01'

Chapter 2? Please?

Fantastically written and leaves me wanting to hear more about her encounter in the upcoming parts

Sorry you were in a crappy relationship Becca, but man, if all you wrote is true you know how to put it behind you quick. You tell a good story, I'm looking forward to the next two chapters and more.

Great start Sweetie. I enjoyed it immensely and look forward to the next chapter. xoxo, Di

Please don't leave us hanging! Next installment??

Sounds like some pretty normal reactions to life so far.

Wow everybody, thanks for the kind comments! I know this first part didn’t have much in the sexiness department, but I promise that will ramp up in the next two parts. I’m so glad some people are liking the story so far!

You did a wonderful job of building the story.

Now we need to hear, "the rest of the story. "

Hi ‘Becca’ I’m hooked! Looking forward to reading more, much more! It’s especially exciting that is based on a real life story.

And so what happened next? You're doing a fine job with this.

Loving this! How soon till the next part, Becca? ; )

Dying for Pt. 2 now! Such a cliffhanger right now!

More please, hurry!

Wow!

This is a fantastic tale. On to the next part - just getting to the good stuff, I hope!

Great start!

Meh.

A great start! On to part 2! Great anticipation building; not unlike the hardon in my pants. Not to be too crass, but that is the reason I’m here, isn’t it? Mission accomplished!