by Maguppy Puppy
Nice chapter!
At the end, I was hoping she would finally get to take on the entire village. But hey, this is great the way it is!
Keep up the good work. The installments are just about the right length, maybe a smidge longer but I like the scene by scene break down. Makes it a fun quick read.
You have good writing potential, buy could you make the next installment longer?
Looking forward to the continuing stories.