All Comments on 'Double-edged sword for a bi-woman'

Why is this the same as the first part but just changed titles? I want to know what happens between Sarah and Anne because I'm a guy, too, but Sarah is a bit of, I don't like to say it, so I'll stick with that Sarah's a minx. She's promiscuous and doesn't care that she was cheating with a guy even when he had a girlfriend, she just wanted his dick. Cheating is not cool. You, Eroticalust, should open up the second chapter by having Anne slap Sarah. You should also get a bit more detailed with the sex parts. I feel that they're well-spaced out in proportion to the rest of the story, but I feel that they also lack a bit of emotion in these scenes and you need emotion in sex scenes. Otherwise what's the point? If there's no emotion it might as well be called non-erotic sex.