All Comments on 'Double Life'

by redsky12345

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Just Awful!

Please stop writing the dialogue the way you talk. I need you to have someone or several persons to read your writing before posting. It could help making the flow cleaner. Dang!

LittlelottaloveLittlelottaloveover 5 years ago
I like it

Continue please!!! I wanna find out more about the hot seven 😍😉

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