All Comments on 'Double Life Ch. 02'

by Julie20

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jpalsgrjpalsgrover 12 years ago
More mental abuse is needed!

Submission is as much mental as physical, work more on Helen's head.

Nitro70652Nitro70652over 12 years ago
I disagree

I read the other comment and I disagree. I think you are writing a good amount of mental anguish for this new submissive. The humiliation is where it could intensify. So far it's been the usual sex with strangers thing... there are other humiliations this sexy little thing could endure to bring her down too. Bodily functions controlled.... etc. Just a suggestion. I see I'm reading these later than others so I'll just shut up and enjoy the story you have already put out there.

5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Perfect Use for a Church!

I love this! The series is perfect with a respected pious woman as total slut and slave to both her friend and her own hidden desires! There are a LOT more "Helens" than we know!

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