by MacSwain612
Loved the start, just hated where it ended!! Finish it, Please!!
Damn,great start to the story. made me hard and wanting to try it too. please please put up rest of the story..
A+++ effort so far........
Quite an intriguing story.
Great buildup to the first step.
Please use your spell check. wear should be where.
It detracts from the story.
I'm looking for the sequences.
How can you be so cruel to stop right there?
please put up the rest of the story.