All Comments on 'Dowdy Mother in Law Ch. 10'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 2 years ago

I just can't get past the lack of emotions for the loss of their marriage. I get how it allows you to breeze through the open sex, but definitely takes away from me engaging with your characters .4*

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 2 years ago

Another great chapter.

Scott1946Scott1946about 2 years ago

Totally agree another wonderful chapter

You capture everything so beautifully. Brings back the memories of my affair with my Mother in Law many years ago.

bawdi1bawdi110 months ago

Another fantastic chapter and Muriel is an awesome addition, I so want to fuck a naughty 80 year old!

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