All Comments on 'Down on You...'

Wow! What an incredibly hot debut for a new writer! VERY real, very hot.. wow...

Excellent, Super good, felt like I was there---and it was good!

Super hot!! I came long and hard. I can't BELIEVE you came all over his bare toes!! Thank you!

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It made me LITERALLY shart a glass of cum.

What the fuck is wrong with you?

U gave me a huge boner. I like to fuck hard and fast, and this was what i was looking for. But why not include some penetration? This is intense, but you need to give more. Make it hot, boiling, sexy, agonizing. Give your reader their own orgasm. More sex! Make it last forever.