All Comments on 'Down on Your Knees'

Blow his in law was genius

I hate cheating wives, I believe if he could've gotten a better deal on the divorce, they would've divorced.

The father-in-law I would never let them near either my wife or my children, my house or myself!

Couples counseling would be a must, and as long as the children we're minors she would be on a short leash.

I've been looking for a new mother for my children and not the old girlfriend. As an executive he could find a better woman if he needed.

3 stars.

I would have pulled my gun, and said: “Either his cum hits the back of your mouth, or a bullet does.”

ZK

apoyo a ZK

I’ve read this before on this site

A fun read, especially considering how short it was Lotsda fun in almost no time at all. Thanks.

Neat! Very original and good, quick thinking 'outside the box' by the MC. Five.

Good short story. Novel way to ascertain what happened. Now for the 2nd part. 4 stars Bob

I liked that. thanks.

Aaron married into a totally dysfunctional family. Her Dad probably broke up his family cheating or he wouldn't have condoned his dipshit daughter doing the same. Not to mention that the interloper wasn't very smart either. He really thought he could pull that off. Aaron should have made his suck Dad's dick or get hurt.

Hilarious. Thanks.

I thought there we're kids 2 and 4.🤔

Awful, the plot was good, just very bad delivery with stilted and amateurish dialogue.

Before I realized Aaron was tipped off, I thought he had the wisdom of Solomon. This story could have been a classic with more and better dialogue. Great concept by the author.

Freaking epic! So funny.

Funniest cheating bust EVER!

Great story, fun read⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved the story! Epic bust!! 4/5 BRB

Great short story so far. Now off to part 2.

It was honestly pretty damn funny.

Didn't see that coming, just thought old dad was getting head from another guy!!!

So tell us more about Carrie in the next story

Very good, short but well thought it