All Comments on 'Down on Your Knees'

Good one. Ole Chris couldn't go through with the blowjob on Jack. Haven't seen that cheating tell before in LW. Really good stuff.

Very nice!

The husband tearing apart the cheating wife's cover story was brilliant!

Fantastic story but I would of liked a bit more but hey . Just what you wrote was enjoyable. Me myself would of liked of did he burn the bitch did he keep the kids just needed them and a few more questions answered. Couldn’t fault the story I just wished there was more. Anyway fantastic story by a fantastic talented writer

Reads well and makes sense but it sure is over in a hurry. The old GF was too pat.

Lots of build up, no real payoff

if your a paid escort......suck that dick dog

Please continue

Very good.

The discovery is common but obtaining the proof was unique. I liked it. Seems daddy and daughter share a genetic trait for cheating.

It'll be his biggest mistake if he gives his ex a second chance...4*

Nice way to catch a slut in a lie.

By the way, bad enough she had her own dad lying for her, but there's something truly vile about a woman fucking around on her husband in his own home, with her kids sleeping in their own rooms, right next to hers... Truly disgusting.

Time to move on. Hopefully, his lawyer can somehow get him primary custody - doubtful, but 'won't her to try.

Pretty good flash, author.

Thanks!

Because her wish came true, the very next day. The DSC was served.

I figured he would ask to have the guys have sex to prove it but I almost thought he would have the dad do the blow job not chris.

Good job, thanks

Everyone loves redheads.

That was fun.

Cute concept. Guess we know why the parents divorced. Cheaters of the world unite!

. . . is that so many bad guys get kicked in the nuts so easily. Men instinctively protect their balls, and even an unathletic guy will be able to press his legs together and pivot before a knee or a foot can be delivered. In a situation like the one described here, Chris would have been on alert, and Aaron could never have delivered that blow. Aaron might have been able to beat him up, but not the way it was described.

Let’s face facts: too many LW stories describe fights in ways that make it seem as though the authors had never actually been in a fight, at least not one that they won.

Finally, a husband gets to kick the trainees ass. Thanks.

Nice to see a real man taking care of business. Great way to expose the cheater and throw the trash to the curb.

Is that even if her cover story WAS true, it is still vile and wrong, still involves lying and deceit, and still would be damaging to the trust between them.

It is funny that they went to all the trouble to have an excuse, when he wasn't expected home early. But that the excuse is still unacceptable, is just hilarious.

I suppose this story DOES provide an exception to LW standard practice. I guess homosexuality is OK in a LW story as long as it becomes weaponized to somehow get at the truth of a betrayal.

I think it funny that Chris couldn't stand the thought of sucking a cock! Ha ha! He'd rather get his ass kicked. Really makes you think twice about all the wimp hubbies who think they are totally strait and just wanting to make wifey happy when they take her lover's dick in their mouths. There was another story posted about that very thing today. Nope Nope, not gay, a man sucking another guys dick is just FINE! As long as there is the wife nearby, we can BOTH pretend that it isn't gay. Nope. Not at all.

Best part of this story is showing that even a slimy wife fucker asshole with little to no self respect wouldn't stoop so low as to sucking on a dick.. There is just some things that a NON GAY GUY WON'T DO!

LOL!

A lot of story in one page. Well done!

Definitely enjoyed the first part. Just needs a conclusion.

5* A plan within a plan. Him kewl. However, in reality, she gets the house, kids, and alimony. At least he kicked her lover's crotch. If prewarned, hubby should have installed hidden video cameras to use as leverage.

Nice test for the escort

I liked the set up. I enjoyed how he was insisting the guy blow her father to prove they were gay. I wasn't thrilled to learn he had a woman waiting in the wings already. I wasn't happy to learn the father was lying to help his daughter cheat. That seemed like a very bad dad, and I try to respect fathers. This father was pretty damn low.

I mean really?

Great some guy catches his wife fucking about, I'll admit testing the escort was novel but there is zero sex in this, is there anything in here that's erotic? Anything at all? I mean if you get turned on by reading about strong, cunning men maybe you should be reading the gay stories?

Just an idea for all you 5* guys.

One for the monogamous, boring, I'd kill the bitch crew. Enjoy. You are more than welcome to it.

Good setup. At least she wasn't fucking her Father.

First he can kick out the father. But the wife stays, divorce her she gets alimony, child support, till she remarried ,kepts the house till the child turns. 18. He still is fucked. So much for our justice system.

Obviously Daddy Dear had no problem with sexual incontinence and was happily guzzling the husbands Scotch whilst his daughter was cheating on him.

Getting paid to fuck his wife would be one for the books.

Nice touch, getting the escort back to test out the spin. As for "having a girl in the wings", well clearly he didn’t. She phoned him out of the blue after discovering his wife's affair and has not until this moment been involved with Aaron during his marriage. So, the only duplicity was on his wife and father-in-law's side, and the trainer who at least got a taste of medicine. Nicely paced story, left me with an acute sense of justice all round.

That part about sucking her dads dick was hilarious. That would make an excellent scene in a movie. I bet some producer steals the idea. 5 stars man.

Need a follow up!

5*

Well done! A touch of originality.

Not much of a father-in-law in any regard, but then the wife didn't fall far from the tree. Clever twist.

Unusual and interesting plot.

Dad defending his daughter

hints to him being a cheater too.

I really enjoyed this one.

Top ratings from me.

A really good way to smoke out the wife's lover. He would do anything for love, but he wouldn't do that.

Well done story. 5 Stars. No 2nd installment needed, this one is about as good as it gets.

Where were the kids?

Some people really are too smart for their own good.

I liked the way he caught his wife, my only question is where were the kids when all of this happened?

5 starrs

....that was a great story! Well done. 5 stars. Thsnx!

Loklie

Save a few lines (and two unused characters) by leaving the kids out of it!

Why would the father not throw the trainer out when he showed up? There doesn't seem to be any rhythm or reason for his actions. It would be great to see the cheating sluts reaction to being dumped.

No twist, but it sure was fun to read.

I Liked it OK .. But The father and daughter got off scott free .. Not The ending I was looking for . Still a good read over all ..

Hope you see your way to adding at least one more chapter to explain what happened, was dad getting daughter on the side and trainer found out and this payment for silence or what.

Yes good yarn,don't often say but there is more to be had from this story and hope for another chapter.

What about the two kids?

Second bite of the apple.

Hubby changed his plan and drove home the night before instead of using his plane ticket the next morning? That suggests Hubby had driven his car (company or personal car ... Mox Nix) to his client’s site. He’s going to leave that car with the client until he gets called back? And what do you do with the return flight ticket? Yeah, you could rent-a-car and write off the unused plane ticket ... and this MAY have been worth it, given that Hubby was alerted with little advance notice. However, that probably shoulda been mentioned near the end when explaining the ex-GF’s warning.

Still laughing at Chris saying fuck this shit you caught us!!!!!! Thanks for sharing .

4 stars

Now this was a funny story...and a novel way to catch a cheating wife. I agree with others that this was one bad dad-in-law. He was even lower than the cheating wife.

Thank You for a very entertaining and funny story.

There is a lesson in debate here if I can learn it well enough.

Just a nice fun little romp. Love the dude getting as far as down on his knees before he confesses. He got off lightly with a simple toe to the 'nads.

Short but sweet!

So this is the kind of shit incels jerk off to before going to sleep in their mama's basement. Doesn't even deserve 1*

Your loving wife and your in-laws, who can you trust? Your ex-girlfriend who's a redhead to boot! LMFAO Nice. Signed: BTW

Sweet!

FTDS

but not for your daddy to save your mirage. TK U MLJ LV NV

Is it difficult to sit down with that stick up there?

This story was hilarious and critical anons are cowardly poindexters.

A good flash story. 4/5

@Lickideesplit, airplane ticket? Return flight? Rental car? What story did you read?

I liked it. A funny story. 4****

@Lickideesplit

Save a few lines (and two unused characters) by leaving the kids out of it!

I didnt know you wrote this story. I guess we better let Bh76 know how you want it.

Thinking Daddy was tapping the bitch too!

More dumb bitches

Hilarious plan to out them.

That is too funny.

Good story. Nice BTB...

"Fuck this shit" LMAO Chris came clean quick af , cracked me up!

Loved how he called their BS.

Very good story here, just didn’t need part two.

Bh76 has shown delightful innovation with the trick of buying the "escort" for a quick humjob. (smiles...) Thanks!

Keep 'em comin'.

i never stop loving you . just plain bullshit.

Aaron's more of man than 70% of the cuckold on this sites stories

Quite clever and original. Thanks.

Fathers giving blowjob? Are you kidding..........yuck, you pervert

Just brilliant!

He spilled the beans when he called her honey.

Wow. I never saw that coming. It is amazing the level of depravity a woman will sink to in Literotica. And the fact that dear old dad helped her try to cover the shit, even makes it worse! I hope they had a pre-nup. Would have liked a second chapter, to explain how he burnt the bitch, and her family. 5 stars!

That was a very clever story.

He did right getting rid of the cheating slut...

One more time for this great story. Get Carrie quickly, before she gets away.

Cute, but the two kids were basically mentioned and then left completely out of all considerations.

Stupid women want a bit of strange but do not want to take the pain when they get caught

I enjoyed it but nobody who had just caught his wife cheating would call her a ‘dumb twit’.

Can't wait to see what is next. Why did she cheat, is this the end? 5/5

Hahaha...good one by the husband

Well written, clever, nicely short and to the point. 5/5

Nice twist

I'd be wary of Carrie. She dumped Aaron once and she sounds manipulative

Great story....lived the trap

Spoiler alert: they’re all going to die someday and the universe will expand into oblivion and nothing matters.

Good start to a better story needs an ending so only 4 stars

Got to say I loved it, a different twist than most other stories 5* from me

Great story well done another author for my favourites list

Now that was funny, had a good chuckle!

Damn, I loved it