All Comments on 'Down on Your Knees Ch. 02'

As great as part one was this was just awful and plumbed new depths of juvenility, which is quite a feat considering some of the trash I've read on this site. The rotten cherry on the rancid icing on this stale cake was the cringe inducing 'anal sex is the solution to all problems' trope, although given the quality of the rest of it I would have to admit that it was probably not out of place here.

I didn't like this one. I don't like RAAC stories.

How about NO Ups due to lack of a story???? Neither part was really erotic..... Just weird...

Actually disliked this part. The 2 wrongs not making a right... he either takes her back- maybe with conditions, or doesn't. Him having sex with his ex & making his wife watch & eat the ex's pussy was actually humiliating & worse than his wife did. This, after the fine 1st part? Bob

Effing stupid

Kinda of a letdown after the great first part, but guy getting kicked in the nuts again was nice.

Last 3 paragraphs deserve 5 stars on their own!

Are there any stories on LW where, at some point, the MC doesn't bawl his eyes out like a little girl?

I like Carrie.

I quit reading when I got to the anal section. What is it with Americans and their sick obsession with the the wrong hole anyway?

He should have left the two bitches together and hit the road. No divorce, just abandon her and let her figure it out while Carrie uses her as a fuck toy.

All the usual tropes, he's Irish, wifey loves him to death but just had to try a bit of strange, ex offers her ass, he bawls his eyes out like a little girl, he's an 'expert' with his tongue etc, etc. Not particularly well written either, and where's the originality? Not here that's for sure, if I could give it less than 1 I would.

A downgrade from part 1 which was a classic.

Great ending.

This was an interesting story and I would give it 5 stars. I was surprised that Karen stayed for the entire fuck session and the revenge on Chris in the end was a nice surprise. Good job on the story.

I enjoyed the story, a little on the unbelievable side but a good story none the less⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I like Carrie. I agree that 2 wrongs don’t make a right, but the second wrong was so she would understand. I can’t disagree with that.

Just right.

Four stars, until the revenge on Chris. Perfect.

Heh heh

Two disgusting cheaters…they deserve each other and the hell they are creating.

Loved the writing and yet the story, i am torn between 2 adages "2 wrongs don't make a right" and at the same time "Actions have consequences" seems your short series express both in a wonderful balance well done

Pretty cruel to make the wife watch his revenge. But the payback with the trainer was outasight.

Sorry, but this reads like a High School sophomore's try at fiction.

Crap

Why are lit authors so fixated on ass play? If not a description of the actual deed, virtually every story contains references to it and this authors no exception. Personally I think it's vastly overrated, or should I say grossly overrated (yeah there's a little joke in there if you look hard) and adds little if anything to most stories.

I think she had to witness him fucking another woman to truly comprehend the hurt she inflicted and guarantee she could never stomach even thinking about fucking around ever again. Plus, you know, balance. Of course if you want to avoid situations like this just stay fucking faithful. It honestly isn't that hard. Avoid the sluts, narcissists and selfish people and you've ruled out 99% of cheaters pretty much.