All Comments on 'Downward Dog Pt. 01'

so so good omfg

Just incredible! Please continue

Wonderfully crafted and plotted. I’d like Heather getting used more too if you decide to write more

Amazing story asalways. Can't wait for part 2 with the neighbor.

So good!

It was really good but I was kind of disappointed there wasn't more puppy training and generally Heather being forced to service Jackie.

Thanks for reading everyone! Dragonlad, luckily this is planned to be a two part series, so I am hoping you will find a lot more of what you are looking for in the conclusion.

Like the story. Need more humiliation for Heather. I loved when she was naked on her knees bowing down to Jackie

I gave it five stars but was hoping to see more puppy training as well as servicing Jackie more and doing it more openly , maybe even asking for the privilege to do so. I did think that there was more repetition of paragraphs then necessary to get the mind control point across. can't wait for chapter two and for her big event to go wrong

It was a great story.

Came back for a second read, ugh I'm so excited to see where this goes! "Puppies don't speak" was so good, I have no doubt that you're going to take this somewhere incredible.

I feel like Jackie would really get along well with the girl from Cross Contamination (Renee? I don't remember lol), they both love ruining marriages and sending sneaky texts. And omg always so good when Faria gets to flip the script and go after her client!

The final sex scene, with poor Heather somehow feeling cucked while literally having sex with her husband... So iconic. You're so good at this dude, I hope your patreon takes off BC you so deserve it.

I'm ngl I was a little heartbroken when a new chapter came up and it wasnt Hottie in the Mirror Part 3 but everything you write is just so good, so, great, now I have ANOTHER Rabblelaid series I'm desperately waiting for a new chapter of :p

Really good hope you add more puppy training for Heather in the next chapter!

Great story, keep it up!

Yeah, I caught that tremor reference