All Comments on 'Dr. Mathias Ch. 01: Enslaving Ruby'

Nice story, enjoyable, keep it up.

basically nice storyline but far too less empathic. In an hypnosis theraphie the construct of self-visualition and destructed self-perception is brought back to an previous constructive self-happiness. So there is an outlook on how feelings are interpretet and to what result. Basically, people must un-learn false assumptions and recognise the errors that keep them struggeling. If you would take more efford in perciving that in your story, it would be far better because it would really help the actress to feel better and feel / be happy. It would still be the same storyline but avoiding an destructive construct of false assumptions. Keep on writing - but an story is so much better with an little bit backround-check of some facts; even if it is fantasy