All Comments on 'Draegos-Prime Ch. 01'

Daue, Draukus, Draegol, it is annoying to use almost the same name for several characters.

I loved it, the idea is great and I can't wait to see what happens, of course I hope that he finds his one-mate and doesn't die. It would make for the best story. As for the names, I did have to reread it a few times, but it didn't distract from the story during the first important read. Keep going!

Its a good intro, but not much of a chapter in itself. What other people said about character names does hold true, using the same prefix, might seem like a good idea as a theme, but it makes it very hard to keep the characters straight, and comes across as a bit corny.

Please continue!