by Vjax
I thought I was going to have to wait another week or so until chapter 25. But it was only a day which made me very happy. Your writing style is superb and the story is a very easy read. I'd like to only wait a day until chapter 26,But will wait no matter how long.
Didn't seem like it. You still had the problem of using Valerie's name when it should've been Tera and vice-versa. I didn't notice any other problems with editing mainly because I glossed over the sex scenes, which turned out to be pretty much the whole chapter. I sometimes find sex scenes to be tedious and rather irrevelant with regards to the story, and as a result, I skip them. Only when the story is focused around the sex do I read those scenes. So, with that said, I find the sex scenes in this story tend to be rather tedious, and thus I skip them. Nothing against the story, though, just the sex scenes.
I have now read both of your series. I loved both. Yes, there were a couple of times you got the names missed up but the stories were great. You absolutely must finish both series for me.