All Comments on 'Dragon Heart Ch. 01'

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avengilineavengilineover 9 years ago
Good Start

I like it and I hope you write more. It has caught my attention... by the by this entire story technically should be Italicized because Raja is narrating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Wonderful premise.

aisielynnaisielynnover 9 years ago

*smiles*

A very interesting start to another wonderful tale. i am looking forward to the next chapter.

animeturtleanimeturtleover 9 years ago
Good start

I Love the start of what you have I wish there is more to it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Exciting!!

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Hey everyone! I'm just an amateur writer exploring what I can do. Please feel free to critique me and let me know what I can improve on! ^_^

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