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Click hereI have roamed the jungle. I have continued to change my form as I desire - and, yes, I have found the occasional jaguar or Mayan female that has stirred my appetite and I have enjoyed the joining. But I have also flitted through history (and pre-history and the time before men walked upon the earth). I have kept busy. I have tried to stay amused. I have enjoyed life as I could.
And, I have found a female dragon who fits my temperament, who has joined me in my flitting; and we are contemplating a family to bring forward a new generation of dragons - but that is another story.
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lonecrowover 3 years agoThe story reads as if you could not decide how elaborate or how brief you wanted to write it. As a tree result, part of it drags on and part of it is too abrupt. If you ever plan to write seriously, you will have to invest a lot of time editing and restructuring stories to make them more coherent. (Talking about the whole story here, not just this part.)
There is a simple rule for story writing: "show, don't tell". I don't take this as the golden rule or anything, but using this as a guideline can improve storytelling significantly. You tell a lot in this story, but show nothing. Showing considerably more and telling less would have made the story much more palatable.
