by barbarian queen 2
Incredible story, and those who say it was unrealistic probably don't believe in dragons either! Please keep writing, I just loved this one!!
For those that are saying the nipple piercings were unrealistic, I have both of mine done twice, I did the horizontal ones myself, a friend did the vertical ones, I enjoyed having mine played with immediately afterwards.
Earlier, I wanted a werewolf mate, now I want dragon... Made me sigh wishfully so many a times.... Amazing writing...
A scrumptiosly sensuous tale. Was wondering when we would get to more of the story. Nice build up...would like to read more.
Sincerely, Payenbrant
Wow i would absolutely love to see more of this story it is wonderful
Love tats....love blonds.....sexy blonds with fantastic cocks and who KNOW how to work a piece with them. You described their sexual encounters masterfully. Could almost feel every juicy hard driving thrust and boy were they delicious. Nice....very.....very nice. Made me consider spiral dragons for my rack.... what an exotic surprise that would be for my honeyboy.
This is what we like to see.
I really did quite love this story, but I would have liked to of seen a little more depth to the characters. Perhaps backgrounds, histories..even names.
i would love to see another chapter to this fantastic!!!!!
I LOVE this story. I've read it so often and do doubt will continue to do so. All I need is my dragon and a pair of dragon tatoos. yum.
OMG! I love tatoos and mystical creatures, particularly dragons. This was GREAT! Best of both! If I could find my dragon.... Mmmm.... THANK YOU!
Was stupid. It's a story with a dragon and you're sitting there complaining how unrealistic the nipple piercing part was? Give me a break. Other than that stupid comment the story was great and I hope to read more submissions from you.
The writing of the story was pretty good, you're style is nice, but I have to wonder if you've ever had your nipples pierced. From personal experience, they f***'n hurt and you definitely don't want someone pulling on them minutes after. Maybe dragons have magic healing spit...all assumption of course. Maybe next time you should ask someone about that, or mention magic spit. The inaccuracy or confusion took away from the story, and with such potential, you don't want that. Thank you for your contribution! I did really enjoy it.
You found my deepest desire and brought it to life perfectly!
You have an amazing talent there. Keep writing. This is by far my favorite story. Thanks!
I have enjoyed all of Your stories but this one is trult beautiful. The magic of a love so fierce that joins both. Thank You BQ Ma'am (hugssss)
*darkbarby*
Powerfully written!You have captured the very essence of the Dragons!I found your story compelling and erotic and could only wish for more,well done indeed!
Like the very best of fairy tales, this was simple, loving and so, so erotic. Where is that beautiful dragon, I wonder? And does he share?
MMMMMmmmmmm.
I think I've read this story about twenty times now. As someone who's been writing about dragons and other such creatures since I was like ten, whoa baby...fans herself. This was just exquisite. Your writing is beautiful, gives a reader that rare, actual physical response to a story...and makes me want to run off and work on one of my otherwordly writings...and it's 5 am, lol. Thanks for the hours of enjoyment, write on!
What a poetically beautiful story. Simple and romantic and captures the beauty of Dragons and what it is to love and be loved.
Nicely captured the feel of a tattoo studio - spent some time hanging out in a few myself. Beautiful, powerful story.
Thank you for this story. It was so familiar both in reality and in some dreams (or, rather, wishful thinking). Wow!
A lovely story, beautifully written. It kept me captivated until the end...thank you!
Truly riveting and beautiful, well-written and creative. A true treasure!!!