All Comments on 'DragonForce Ch. 02'

I read this story as a spin off from the Anne McCaffrey's Dragons of Pern series The characters and story line are both developing nicely and so far it is a good read keep it going

Really enjoying this.

This is first rate storytelling. Thank you for such an entertaining read.

I've detected a few small things where you have departed from Anne's work aside from the ones mentioned in your notes at the very beginning. Just minor interactions between known characters that only a hard-core fan such as myself would notice. But they haven't been significant enough to have me screaming foul just yet.

I'm leaning towards a score of 4 this time, but I rounded it up to a full five anyway. 5/5