by shakna
Think you'll bring these characters into Toofy? If this is set before the current point in Toofy (ch 21) maybe Salmon is pregnant or delivered and possible to be a nursemaid to Toofy's babies? Saia would be of better use in the battle while Salmon cares for the kids and Reenhalla protects her and the kids.
I hate to admit it, but I really like how you have Reenhalla becoming a vigilante hunting down bad guys and punishing them for hurting innocents. You might consider expanding this one at some future date.
This is the weirdest thing I have ever read. I have nothing to compare it with so I'm not sure how many stars it should get. I am giving it five stars for inventiveness.