All Comments on 'Dream'

Promising writing, a flair for description, holding the drama to the end. Enjoyed. However, while some spelling or grammar gaffs don't distract the reader too much, this one did. Threw instead of through! Got threw spell check, didn't it?

Unfortunately that slipped by me not to mention trying to type while in a semi rig that is bouncing down some of the worst roads I think I have known in the US didn't help me any either. I do apologize for the nasty spelling mess ups and grammar in this as grammar is one of my worst suits. Hopefully I will make sure to get things a little better as I go along and not distract from the actual story. I am hoping to be able to add more to this as time goes along though I am unsure how much will either be remembered or come to light for me to add.