by purrs4u
loved this story, very sexy. as for the ppl ranting and raving...its a fantasy, enjoy it for what it is..
The story was good. It needs more force on the sexual acts and less of her accepting her consequence so quickly. Please continue to Ch. 2.
Don't worry about those comments who bring up morality etc.... This story is in the right category. Those who don't want this can move to other categories like erotic coupling or romance.
Just kidding, just because I think cruises are the most boring way to spend your vacation does not mean that others should. True, she seemed to be as seriously non consenting as she seemed to be seriously married... still it was a naughty little episode; no moraaly solid community will crush because of it I hope...
Hot, sexy, erotic, beautiful, fun, awsome...what more can I say?
LOVED it! More? :D
Haha! It's so funny XD I clicked on this link by accident (I was trying to read a different category) but I'm so glad I did. This was actually really cute ;) Shame she's already married but I loved it. Brava.
Non Consent ~ 4/5 (Good resistance but gave in too early)
Erotic ~ 5/5 (Felt the tension and the passion)
Content ~ 3/5 (One or two granmar issue[s]; story was too short)
Score ~ 80% (Great plot; story line. Very erotic, just too short)