All Comments on 'Dream Cut Short'

Your lovely prose is enticing, but just as you've begun to get your reader titillated, you abruptly dump them with little or no hope of relief. The least you could do is give us some glimmer of hope that there is more to come. I enjoy your style and sincerely hope that you continue to submit your work, but either flesh out your individual stories further or leave a hook to entice the reader back to the next episode.