All Comments on 'Dream Guy Ch. 01'

by FreddieTheCamel

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muskyboy almost 3 years ago

5/5, saved it in the last few paragraphs. Looking forward to a resolution and happily ever after in part 2.

BBeinhart almost 3 years ago

That was bloody great!! Look forward to the next installment(s)!!

Anonymousabout 2 years ago

I concur with BBeinhart. This is really good. Intelligent, interesting, very well written. Assured.

mitchawa almost 2 years ago

You have the love moment down pat. one of the best descriptions I've read. Much like meeting your future wife..

Hiker66Biker over 1 year ago

This 3-chapter saga gripped me in the first 3 paragraphs and wouldn’t let go until the end. Great writing, great plot and funny. 5 stars, added to my favourites and thanks for sharing.

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I write both professionally and for fun. The stories and essays I post on this site are for fun. I've also taken the first steps to self-publishing under the name Freddie T Camel, although more as an experiment than an ambition. I want to write stories that have emotional res...

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