All Comments on 'Dream within a Dream Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

Thank you for another wonderful short story series!

I think I have read almost all your work & I believe your plots are just out of this world.

Please keep us all guessing for a while longer before revealing the one behind all the mysteries.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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awesome, as always. would be something if crowbar, was to impregnate, the shadow man's trophy wife, but very unlikely huh??? or could maybe brainwash, some of his higher ups, like eleanor burke was done. could see turning some of shadow man's lapdogs, like thomas P. Cook, austin murphy,. the best thing would be, for uncle harvy, to create a lookalike, shadowman. to create problem for the shadow man.

CSD2CSD2over 8 years ago
hmmm...

Seems like Mr Burke is still on the hunt

sdc97230sdc97230over 8 years ago
Surprisingly unbaffling

Usually, these stories keep me guessing about the culprits right up until the big reveal. The only surprise for me here was that Priemus didn't turn out to be an innocent victim of a frame.

A good further unfolding of details about Don's quest to nab Moriarty, though.

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 8 years ago
Yesss!....another enigma!

I'm still enthralled by these "Crowbar" series and, once again, thank the author.

I'm still not sure who the "Shadow Man/Moriarty" is but names have been added to my list of suspects. Every case reveals a bit more.

LeFrog

tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
JUST WHEN YOU THINK ITS SOLVED

another thought-plot comes to mind. Unsolved. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Excellent. Another tantalising snippet right at the end. But is it telling us anything?

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum11 months ago

You have opened anther can. Of. Worms. With Mr Cook involved with the killer chemicals, can Don stop their shipment before mass killings occur?

chytownchytown7 months ago

*****Thanks for sharing.

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