All Comments on 'Dreaming of Francesca'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good ground-work for subsequent stories.

Some tense faltering that proof reading should identify.

Do have to ask : sapped ? As in Allison sapped the liquid . . .? Not familiar with sapped in that use.

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