All Comments on 'Dreams Ch. 01'

I love the way you captured the erotic side and mundane every life of Angela's character. You've left so many questions in the air you must continue. Is she only dreaming? Is something else going on? With the introduction or mention of each male character I kept expecting a reveal on her 'phantom' lover. There are a few typos that detract a little from the reading but the ideas behind are good.

Love this story! It has mystery and beautiful sex. U write with the rhythm of a poet! One small tip though, your character is portrayed as a librarian and I was slightly distracted my some verb tenses and occasional wording that could have benefited from a bit of editing. Can't wait to read more of this series!!