All Comments on 'Dressing in Leather'

Good story but where is the follow-up?

Can you slow down the pace and be more "descriptive"?. Sell me the sizzle, not the steak. Also, do more of this narrative in next parts. To be plain, romance me, seduce me with the story. Create visuals and environment, smells and sounds and feels. I want to be carried away into the moment. I am not a just jump in and get my rocks off guy. I like foreplay and afterplay. I hope these thoughts!might be of help in your wriring.