All Comments on 'Drew, Claire and Dominique'

Tantalizing. What a pleasing tease. Thanks

“That was the worst thing ever.” This story might have been better if you’d meant it as dark humor (but without the PTSD). But this trifle about multiple personalities at-will in response to trauma was just off-putting—your story couldn’t get around the logic dilemma that if Claire knows about Dominique and can summon “her” at will, it follows logically that she knows/remembers the gang rape and abuse. It’s off-putting that your writing then simultaneously dismisses and exploits this type of serious trauma. 1 Star.

But in a good way.

Liked this, it summons up many interesting future stories that wash over a reader like a tsunami of delicious possibilities. Some flash stories are self-contained, this one works on its own but also turns on a tap/faucet. It may just be dripping for now but that seal is itching to fail. You must consider turning this into something bigger, please.

This story seems to be your latest, so I am taking this opportunity to comment on "Limbo".

Those two stories are, by far, the best stories I have read on Literotica. I am old and not terribly emotional, but I cried over several scenes -- the funeral scene was really, really well written.

I normally read "loving wives" but now that I have found your stories, I will read more.

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wally@torchlake.com

Wow, a really good an interesting work. The fact that it's 750 makes it even more masterful. Thank you.