All Comments on 'Driving in England Ch. 01'

to what hopefully will be a steamy miniseries. Good to see you contributing to Lit. again. Your former contributions have been awesome. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. The title similie was clever BTW.

yah, the story is good and full of action. 'm wet and fingering as i read. keep up the good work

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You don't need words - you just ARE.

You have an astounding gift for hitting all of my favorite naughty fetishes while still still wrapping them up in expert characterization.

If I weren't stuck at work right now, your skin-tingling description of how gorgeous it feels to slide your fingers into a beautiful woman's asshole would have me beating off like I'd just discoverd how to do it.

Seriously, you perfectly captured the rush of discovery and the fluttery way it makes your heart feel. I seriously hope that this is a continuing series.

Just beautiful... wow. Very very Sexy.

I was just getting into their one one one relationship when up comes the notion of a third person, Mar. Well honey it sort of took the first time romance off the boil for a while, but if you write like this one the next installment will have me reaching for the mop to clean under this chair! lol

It was awesome until the girlfriend part. Kind of demeaning to lesbians (which I am) but w/e. Other then that, great job. (:

I agree with the last response. So sensual and sexy that I felt I was in the car with you. Kissing tasting and smelling you for the first time in my life. The thrill of being with MY woman. Then the letdown when you mentioned your girlfriend. maybe I was just jealous and wanted you all to myself.

This could be interesting and/or nasty!

I love it when a woman like Celeste, comes to her senses dumps her BF and finds solace in a Lesbian Bar. I guess some people just gets lucky. Another one bites the dust and all for the best. This story was beautifully written with an imaginative mind to capture the essence how a beautiful straight woman gets enraptured with a beautiful lesbian. Now her world has changed dramatically.